Wednesday, January 21, 2015

A Torrent of Emotion

Hi friends! It's been a while since my last post in this blog. I would just like to share this wonderful poem made by a special someone. Someone that I met online two months ago and eventually fell in love with. He made this poem for me. Hope you like it as much as I do! :)

A Torrent of Emotion

Tremendous feeling within
Powerful, like an eternal grin
The sound of singing above the din

Captures and holds me
It cannot be sin
To want to hold
How can I express it so



A waterfall, a torrent of emotion
Perhaps an ocean
Which may physically divide
But cannot hide that I care for her

Will never give up on her
And will try my hardest to help
Even when the odds
Feel too great

I could never hesitate
For such wonderful things
One must never wait
As they won't be
There forever

Someone so much alike
Is the unpredictable lightning strike
The strike that opens your eyes so that I
May gaze into them and see all the beauty
Of the world inside comments

14 comments :

Chubskulit Rose said...

Naks, inlove na inlove ah. Namumulaklak pati ang content ng blog hehehe.

Cherry said...

haha, naunahan ako ni Rose sa "in love" comment. keep the love alive! i loved the last line of the poem most. :)

Jessica Cassidy said...

Awww! He sounds like a romantic guy Sis Marie. I wish you and him the best of relationship. He is one lucky guy for a reason to keep your heart beats so fast.

nova hedges said...

great way of expressing yourself through a nice poem.

Joy Calipes-Felizardo said...

That was so sweet of him to dedicate a poem for you! I envy you, I used to receive poems and cute/sweet stuff from my ex, now husband, hope he would do it again though.

Lies said...

This is a lovely poem. Very romantic indeed.

Mia Foo said...

what a lovely poem! very well written, romantic and touching!

Ron Leyba said...

Lovely poem! You can feel the emotion just by reading it! :)

Sin Yee said...

Wow... what a great poem. I have no such talent to write this.

Franc said...

It's really a nice poem. I wonder if you also made a poem for the one who wrote this. It's written from the heart.

Ace Paragoyo said...

he is so inlove with you, creating this poem with so much love. :)

Eliz Frank said...

What a beautiful poem and a great romantic touch as Valentine's around the corner.

Katrina Centeno said...

Oh, a friend of mine wrote me a poem. It was sweet. It was about our friendship but this poem is of the a different case. God bless on your relationship.

Fernando Lachica said...

It's so wonderful to read line by line with the emotion to discover inside. I like the flow of words until the end.

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